How can I make this better?

Put an edit here if you'd like me to help you rewrite this, I seem to have been doing that with a bunch of your things lately. Heh. But really, one thing i think you should change is explaining more about why he's uncomforatable, rather than just saying it. For example, instead of saying "she felt sick", you could say, "she grasped her stomach and moaned. 'Mom,' she called, 'I don't feel so great.'" Also, you could add a little more about what it looks like, how they feel, etc. Just describe more.